Friday, February 12, 2010

Concept & story line

Miner

Name of project: ?

Family loves and adventure movie.

When: in Future
Where: in space (Saturn) satellites moons
Who: 3 families (father, 2 brothers)
Why: for mining a rare mineral (for make big money)
What: the family found a diamond cave. But they meet monster in there.
How: they give up the cave to survive from the monster.

What is the purpose in this film?
Show their tough live and relationship. What is real pressure thing in life?

1) Who is my Hero?
The family
2) What is your Hero Trying to accomplish?
A compelling goal
3) Who is trying to stop your hero?
A monster,
4) What happens if your hero fail?
A live or Death
5) How to make your villain unsympathetic?
caused undeserved misfortune.
The four Archetypes
Orphan- Father didn’t make good money for the family. So they live poor together in the space.

Wanderer- they are looking around rare mineral in status orbit. Father and brother can’t make a compromise in work. Finding better way.

Warrior- Fight with monster, for the money first, It was too big to give up. Also for family.

Martyr- They decided left everything for live, they are consoled each other.

INTRODUCTION
ET) 1: 15
Where: space
Who: The family
What: mining
Why: for make big money.
(Dangerous, but efficient)
Characters introduce. With conversation
Messy interior: showing their status on society.

(Father with brother conversation might be…
Son knows much efficient way to earn better than father’s way.


DEVELOPMENT
ET: 1:15
Where: In cave
Who: family
Why: elder brother shouting and yelled
What: found diamond cave. They play with joke

Machine stopped.
Elder brother found a diamond cave in fixing giant drill.
Be happy with the found in the cave.
(They say about what they will do with the big found, younger brother feel little anxious about future)

Younger brother love and satisfy now their situation, even though they live very poor and tough. He worries that every body left and separate because of big money)

Appeared monster.



TURN
ET: 1:15

Escape from cave, Elder brother try to defeat the monster with mechanic ship.

Elder brother drives the machine fight with the monster but he can’t make it.
( lots action shots )
The small meteorite has left its orbit in fighting; start to fall to the planet.
( He success to control the monster temporary, but ships going to be destroyed)

Father decides to evacuation from the meteorite.
The ship separate. Store ship with mother ship.


Conclusion
ET: 1: 15

The monster that was believed dead takes the store ship at the last moment..

When father, elder brother can not do nothing, younger brother pull
Lever that separate the small evacuation ship from the store ship.

They survived from danger.

With short sigh, they cheer up each other.
They slowly become before their mind. Start arguing again dad and first son. Younger brother loves this situation either.

Even we are in small space I feel full with my family.






Character Personality

Father: look 55 year old.
Have worked over 20 years, very experience in tough and danger.
He is very patient and he doesn’t want to be in danger for little better money.
( safe way ) Also He very looked tired and poor. In his work life he is stubborn.
(If he has lot money, he will open food restaurant.)(He has favorite menu…something rational but normally people don’t like it)


1 son: He is tough than any family member. He always gives scold to father about his an inefficient mining.
He insists that if they work in other orbit where lots space miners found a lot mineral will make better money. But father believes that there is too dangerous and far, so there are many expenses. He doesn’t like his father’s work style and his inefficient safety first policy. But he loves his father.

( If he has big money, he wants to stay in nice place with his brother )

2 son: He has low mental age. (not sure) facial problem. He is pretty optimistic boy than other.( He loves stay with his family.)
After found big money, He is afraid that separation of family. He wants stay together. It is only one thing what he wants.


Background Concept

Time is pretty a future.
Mankind starts to find rare mineral in space. Normally, tenant miner are using a small transportation which can set on small asteroid, drilling and crash find a mineral.
It is much easier and cheaper than landing a big planet.
But It is very dangerous and need a lot time. The job is similar to Deep-sea fishery now a day. Tenant miners are using an old fashion machine, early 2020 years stuff. From this time, it is very new but in 2090 it is very old and dangerous. But for money saving, people usually modify the rockets, and use it.

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